Hotspot writing

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Welcome back to my blog today In will be showing you my writing that we did in our own hotspot doc. For our hotspot writing we had to do a piece of writing called show don't tell. It took me about two days to finish this writing in our own hotspot doc.Here is my writing that I did in my hotspot doc.

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DATE

WRITING

31-7-2019

Week 2 Finish the table below by describing each of the ‘Telling’ sentences. SHOW Don’t Tell Brian pursed his lips and clenched his fists into tight balls. Try as he might he could not contain himself. Within seconds he erupted like a volcano. Brian was angry. He started to yell. An ache started deep in his stomach. He turned away as his eyes welled up with tears. Johnny felt sad. Bailey was so nervous to see his mum for the first time he smiled to hard that his face started to hurt.He was jumping up and down when he saw her mum walked out off the plane at the airport. Bailey was happy. Jeremy was so excited when sport was canceled. he yelled out yay!!!!! Sport is canceled.And ran around the house so excited that sport was canceled he keep yelling until his voice went away.   Jeremy was shocked. Tama was so excited that he had a rugby game in the afternoon.He keeps talking during the test that his teacher told him to keep the noise level down. Tama was excited by the rugby match he was playing in that afternoon.

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