Welcome back to my blog today I will be showing you my Hot spot writing.For our hot spot writing we had to write anything about the picture that Miss D put up for every one in the class to write about.When we where done we had to Highlight our descriptive sentences in blue and re read again and Highlight our strongest vocabulary in yellow.We also had to re read again and check our full stops and our capitals.
Here is mine.Hope you like it
Week 6
Write your own story inspired by this picture.
- Re-read once and highlight your descriptive sentences blue.
- Re-read again and highlight your strongest vocabulary yellow.
- Re-read again and check your full stops and capitals.
Bang I heard the engine exploded as Tom was flying our spaceship. We are about to crash Tom said to the Fobilishis squad.Brace yourself Truby the boss of our squad said.Take cover Quaid said.BOOM!!! We crashed.Is anyone hurt? No the team said.We failed our mission and know our boss will get angry.Our mission was to steal the minecraft diamond from the suaside base.Let's try again said Truby but we can’t try again without a ship said Tom back to Truby.Wait we don’t need a ship because we are already there said Quaid to the whole squad.Lets go and get the minecraft diamond from there base.Wait a minute is that Lennox over there with the minecraft diamond yes it is him said Tom.Yay everyone said to Lennox we have accomplished our mission.Opps said Lennox how the heck are we supposed to get back.THE END
Hoped you liked my hot spot writing Week 6.Don't forget to comment down below and say what I should do next time.
BYE
Hi Sam,
ReplyDeleteI really like how your included your friends like me! You need o work on some of your spelling because it didn't make sense and I couldn't read your story of the kids going into war. Good job on this blog post I hope to see more and more blog post from you keep up the good work. BYE
Hi Sam,
ReplyDeleteI like your writing of your picture. Keep up the good work.