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Wednesday, 7 August 2019

Hotspot writing

Hi guys.

welcome back to my blog today I will be shearing you some of my writing that we did on Thursday.We are learning to describe starting with 'the'.Here is my writing that I done I hope you like it.


Find five things related to the senses to describe in this image. Start each one with ‘The…’
1.The lightning shock down at the water and struck to make a big splash splash.

2.The clouds started to get darker and darker as the day went.

3.The sea was so rough that a boat started to sink underwater.

4.The bright light from the lightning shocked down really fast like a light that turned on.

5.The clouds scudded together as the lightning came down from the sky.

Leave a comment and say what I need to work on.
BYE.



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2 comments:

  1. Truby8 August 2019 at 09:26

    Hello Sam,

    Truby here I liked your five sentence they were destructive. I also notice that your welcome did not have a capital maybe next time you should re read and look for mistake.Thanks bye.

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  2. Adriaan H25 September 2019 at 09:30

    hi sam

    I like your detailed on your blog
    by Adrian

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