My teacher said it had to be between 95 and 105 I got 90. We had to use strong words which is blustery Exquisite Fragile Disillusioned. My class started off with this sentences "My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognize pulled up beside me."
We are learning to Use strong ideas when we are writing. Eliminate unnecessary ideas and words. Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important.
Here is my work. Hope you like it
Don't for get to comment down below and say what I need to work on.Hoped you liked my Hot spot writing.BYE
We are learning to Use strong ideas when we are writing. Eliminate unnecessary ideas and words. Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important.
Don't for get to comment down below and say what I need to work on.Hoped you liked my Hot spot writing.BYE
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