WALT use our scenes in our writing to paint a picture in our head.
Here is an example of my writing. Can you imagine the scenes in your head?
I was going on a spy mission down in the UK. I saw some people walking across the Military Base. I went inside and hid in a box. Bang! A gun shot at me. I was so so scared I ran back out then everyone started to chase me. I called back up then my whole team come in tanks. Boom ! Boom ! Boom ! Boom ! The tanks in my team shot the enemy all down. I was hiding in a bush it felt like I was looking for any bad people that had survived.
I am a student at Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 8 June 2018
Looking after my Chromebook.
WALT Identify ways to keep our Chromebook safe.
This morning for Cybersmart we looked at ways to keep our Chromebook safe. We then created a poster showing some of the points. Here is my poster.
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